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(Request) Applejack: With an apple basket by Dogezon (Request) Applejack: With an apple basket by Dogezon
(Constructive criticism is welcomed)
(My second Applejack picture)

Requested by :iconzap-apple:

I'm not too sure about this one, even though the front legs have been fixed and she has now got her hat.

Other requests that I've done:

Rainbow Dash: Sleeping on a cloud ([link])

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:iconcloud-showers:
cloud-showers Featured By Owner May 17, 2012
she looks so cute:iconmoreapplesplz:
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:squee:
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:iconblazeaura:
BlazeAura Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
She looks pretty good. Nice job with her
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconwolfgaelan:
wolfgaelan Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
she looks perfect to me now ^_^ yay
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:squee:
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:iconsmexylittlekitten:
SmexyLittleKitten Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist
The hat makes it even more adorable.
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:squee:
I was rather worried that the hat would kill it.
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:icontokkazutara1164:
TokkaZutara1164 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i loves it :)
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfluttershyyayplz: "Yay!"

You loves it before of after the update?
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:icontokkazutara1164:
TokkaZutara1164 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i dont think i saw it before the update :aww:
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well... she's had several.
Anywho, I am glad that you like it :D
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:icontokkazutara1164:
TokkaZutara1164 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol :)
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:iconxrobotictsunamix:
xRoBoTiCtSuNaMix Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
The bangs of the mane is too long, the back legs look like two left legs, her stomach is a bit too large.
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Firstly I've purposely elongated the mane in order to have it hang over the face.
Secondly, are you familiar with the term constructive? Someone with a lesser constitution could have been really disheartened by your comment, distraught even.
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:iconxrobotictsunamix:
xRoBoTiCtSuNaMix Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
k.
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:iconlaffy372:
Laffy372 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The overall picture is truly amazing, and I like the shine of the apples in the apple basket. But, it would've been better if you added her hat. Please don't hate me for writing this comment!
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lots of people seem to think it would've been better if I added her hat. I MIGHT add it at some point as it goes.
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:iconlaffy372:
Laffy372 Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, you don't have to add her hat. It's all up to you :)
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:iconwolfgaelan:
wolfgaelan Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
CUTE ^_^ but 1 thing is the line coming up from her inside fore leg makes it look like she has two left legs but thats all. Awesome work as always :)
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I could just rub that out and instead extend the stomach slightly...
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:iconwolfgaelan:
wolfgaelan Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yea I think that would fix it I know its something small I noticed,it doesn't ruin the pic in anyway though
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've fixed it :D
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:iconsmexylittlekitten:
SmexyLittleKitten Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist
I find the face/hair adorable.
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The face was intended to be have an impact on the viewer. As for the mane, that was meant to be a multiplying factor in terms of cuteness; as I think its position hanging over the face just looks adorable.
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:iconsmexylittlekitten:
SmexyLittleKitten Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist
I always liked how hair looks when it's hanging over the face.
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It just equals instant cuteness for some reason.
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:iconzap-apple:
Zap-Apple Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
The face looks good to me, eyes could have been a tad bit bigger to fill up the face. The body could have been more fuller. The legs are good length compared to the head. Nothing wrong with the mane and tail.

Overal it's good, but keep an eye on the body compared to the head.
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"fuller"?
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:iconzap-apple:
Zap-Apple Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
That's weird I looked up the word I meant to type and it apparently doesn't exist in english. What I meant to type was the plural form of full which in dutch means "vol" which would become "voller" so I thought it was fuller in english.

So what I meant to say was that the body could have been tad "bigger" in comparison to the head.
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Like so?
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:iconzap-apple:
Zap-Apple Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
That's certainly a step in the right direction.
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Only a step?
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:iconzap-apple:
Zap-Apple Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Well, it was the only thing that needed fixing. It looks good as it is now, don't change it.
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:icondogezon:
Dogezon Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm too much of a perfectionist when it comes to drawings :D
I can ruin the whole but focusing on the small.
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